(Randy Feltface's childhood)
(Randy Feltface's childhood)
I enjoy the design/the way these two are drawn way too much lol
waiting for that crossover with captain Tardigrade, love how oddly cute those yellow fellows are and the ending summary cards lmfao
" The phonk you thought waltzing with hats on my turf, ENGLAND IS MY FOOKIN CITY FOOL"
cutest thing with a fun plot twist and animation, the little sound fx adds a lot to it too xD
now *that*'s the style of smooth bounce we're talking about 👀
95% would befriend because "Dnd gobo girls unite - signed my own goblin girl",
bunch of critique stuff:
-Wishing this was a bit more zoomed in because it feels a bit empty and far away. If the goal is to underline how lonely she feels it works, but it could have been divided into 2 different shots, one up of her up close where she's looking at her phone followed by the zoom out showing her alone in her king-size bed (D':)
-I wish the animation was a bit longer but for a fully colorised animation can't complain, I love her design and the attention to details like the matress and the hair moving with her, the concept of a late night sadness is fun!
-The animation of her arm going down is cool though a little bit too steady, Hair is hard to animate and hair while someone is laying on top even harder but it could have been kept in place but just slightly dragged as she moved :3 (right now the hair behind her is a bit too visibly being free deformed)
- The white flash at the end of the loop hurts the eye D: ( for a moment I really thought this was part of the animation and represented rain and thunder outside of her room)
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edit 1: daaw Really glad to have my comment be useful to you in some way :'3! Animation is like any other medium every artist has their unique take on it and I know that the more you'll try your hand at it and more your unique voice will shine, there's already something there so I really encourage you to pursue it if it is something you find fun to do! If you need any recommandation in terms of free software to put together your animations let me know :D!
Also on the fact that this is vent art, definitly got that vibe and understand the feeling 100%, Being ignored on things you put efforts in hurts but really it's best to like vibe and do your thing! Those who matter will stick around uvu! Don't let this stop you! ^^ There are plenty of school of fish in the sea, and all in due time you'll find your people >:3 #GoboGalsUnited
Hey! Thank you for the criticism ! I'm new at animating and still trying to understand the basics. I think the program I used to make it into a video file added the random white screen, sorry about that.
But I feel like I could learn from what you've told me and I highly appreciate it :)
The story behind it was a bit of a vent art. Essentially of no matter what I do or say, always getting ignored but it hitting the hardest when a friend server does that whilst one other person gets all the attention.
But I am glad you liked it! I will keep working on it and try to improve !
cool stuff :
the routine is cool, the design is cute, when she presses her chest together it's a smooth transition, for an experiment it's lovely and if you're the one who made the 3d background it's darn impressive. Can recognize it as being the rather slum-y side of streets, fits the raccoon!
also the attention to the detail of the light/shadow of the environment affecting her!
the less cool stuff:
that titty bounce itself is weird, almost like it's jittering and the timing of it doesn't make sense for how "slow" she's walking. Add to that it's in the middle of the screen and moves faster than the rest and it becomes too noticeable and ruins the flow the rest of the body has. (Also there's a white line on the left side of the video :0 might have to do with the export)
Really sweet designs and aesthetic. The backgrounds are top notch. Animation fit the music pretty well imo ^^ Coming over directly from the Memoir* museum video I can safely say I largely enjoy Sideways Sundays (love the name too lol) more!
One a side note: can't help but be reminded of the manga/anime Girls' last tour. With the after world apocalypse (it seems?) misery and cute girls who can do nothing about it but strive in what's left and all! Lovely.
*Edit 1: I am a *poor sighted moron* lmfao- didn't notice the tags and didn't realize (if the "read shimsim" was always there) that it was refering to another artist's work! I was indeed refering to your work since I was under the impression *Memoir Museum* was in the same world continuity xD -your work is so eery, cute and awesome too, impossible to not feel things while watching your shorts-
Omg though didn't hear about this other work of theirs! thanks for the recommandation ;;! (bumped up to a half star because you were super sweet about my stupidity and fanimations need more love) <3
thank you! i'm not sure if you meant my stuff in general or this animation, but this one is actually based on a manga by the same author as GLT (shimeji simulation). they touch on similar grounds thematically but in very different and interesting ways- check it out if you haven't
lololol interesting to discover out of context xD , not me nodding in agreement with the warden's plan like "hmm what a sound idea to solve the over-population in prisons issue...at last they can never be a menace to any societies like that >:D"
Hi, I'm Niggit!
After years of on and off lurking, I decided to make a NG account for convenience sake ! might post stuff on the side, stick around or not, whatever lol~
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